2025 Competition Lyrics Entry:
Guano Loco by Nancy Johnson
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Lyrics
Vs 1:
She walked in through the door
And everybody stared
A vision of perfection
With locks of raven hair
Her hips were gently swaying
She had bedroom eyes
With her come hither lips
Well they all fantasized
*Chorus:
But she’s guano loco
And I don’t mean maybe
She’s a gorgeous woman
But she’s batshit crazy
Guano loco
Better save yourself
And leave that woman alone
Vs. 2:
He had an air about him
Like there’s nothin’ he can’t do
He gives off the impression
That he’ll take good care of you
He’s got a big, warm smile
And you’ll get lost in his eyes
With his six pack abs
Well they all fantasized
Chorus:
But he’s guano loco
And I don’t mean maybe
He’s a gorgeous fella
But he’s batshit crazy
Guano loco
Better save yourself
And leave that man alone
Vs 3:
They’re walking the red carpet
Waving to their fans
Glamorous and hip
It all goes hand in hand
But they take what they want
Without a second thought
So quit your fantasizing
‘Cause there ain’t no denyin’
Chorus:
That they’re guano loco
And I don’t mean maybe
Yes they’re gorgeous people
But they’re batshit crazy
Guano loco
Better save yourself
And leave that woman
Leave that man
Leave those people alone!
*For airplay, as an alternative to “Batshit crazy” you can substitute with “just plain crazy”
She walked in through the door
And everybody stared
A vision of perfection
With locks of raven hair
Her hips were gently swaying
She had bedroom eyes
With her come hither lips
Well they all fantasized
*Chorus:
But she’s guano loco
And I don’t mean maybe
She’s a gorgeous woman
But she’s batshit crazy
Guano loco
Better save yourself
And leave that woman alone
Vs. 2:
He had an air about him
Like there’s nothin’ he can’t do
He gives off the impression
That he’ll take good care of you
He’s got a big, warm smile
And you’ll get lost in his eyes
With his six pack abs
Well they all fantasized
Chorus:
But he’s guano loco
And I don’t mean maybe
He’s a gorgeous fella
But he’s batshit crazy
Guano loco
Better save yourself
And leave that man alone
Vs 3:
They’re walking the red carpet
Waving to their fans
Glamorous and hip
It all goes hand in hand
But they take what they want
Without a second thought
So quit your fantasizing
‘Cause there ain’t no denyin’
Chorus:
That they’re guano loco
And I don’t mean maybe
Yes they’re gorgeous people
But they’re batshit crazy
Guano loco
Better save yourself
And leave that woman
Leave that man
Leave those people alone!
*For airplay, as an alternative to “Batshit crazy” you can substitute with “just plain crazy”
Author
Bio
When it comes to crafting a bio and tackling the classic “Who are you?” question, my response is often infused with a dash of my wicked humor, leading me to ponder, “Sometimes I wonder…”
On a more serious note, I am a singer/songwriter whose debut album, “Chaos & Grace,” hit the airwaves in June 2023, firmly planting itself in the Americana genre.
While I love to sing and write songs, I consider myself an entertainer, having fun with my audience, giving them some backstories to the songs, sharing a laugh, thus allowing them to forget about their troubles, at least for a little while. But as much as I love all of that, the thing that brings me the most joy, is connecting with my audience.
Beyond the melodies, I wield a rhythm guitar and hold the title of a multi-award-winning author, known by the moniker The Vermont Homesteader. With two published physical books, “Life is Good: Wit & Wisdom From a Vermont Homesteader” and “The Vermont Homesteader’s Christmas Memories: Wit, Wisdom & Holiday Recipes,” along with three Kindle Select Short cookbooks, I’ve woven my tales both musically and literarily.
Outside the realms of music and writing, I proudly wear the hat of a mother to four boys, three dogs, four cats, and a flock of clucking chickens. Amidst these roles, I tend to a large garden, revel in the joys of cooking and baking, and derive immense pleasure from nourishing the bodies and souls of those near and dear to me.
On a more serious note, I am a singer/songwriter whose debut album, “Chaos & Grace,” hit the airwaves in June 2023, firmly planting itself in the Americana genre.
While I love to sing and write songs, I consider myself an entertainer, having fun with my audience, giving them some backstories to the songs, sharing a laugh, thus allowing them to forget about their troubles, at least for a little while. But as much as I love all of that, the thing that brings me the most joy, is connecting with my audience.
Beyond the melodies, I wield a rhythm guitar and hold the title of a multi-award-winning author, known by the moniker The Vermont Homesteader. With two published physical books, “Life is Good: Wit & Wisdom From a Vermont Homesteader” and “The Vermont Homesteader’s Christmas Memories: Wit, Wisdom & Holiday Recipes,” along with three Kindle Select Short cookbooks, I’ve woven my tales both musically and literarily.
Outside the realms of music and writing, I proudly wear the hat of a mother to four boys, three dogs, four cats, and a flock of clucking chickens. Amidst these roles, I tend to a large garden, revel in the joys of cooking and baking, and derive immense pleasure from nourishing the bodies and souls of those near and dear to me.
Co-author(s)
Lyrics Competition Results
Emotional Impact:
11/ 20
Technical Skill:
7/ 20
Memorability:
9/ 20
Storytelling:
15/ 20
Imagery:
8/ 20
Total Score:
50/ 100
Commended
Comments:
Great storytelling here.
Try using the show don’t tell method to make your lyrics paint a picture for the listener.
Try using the show don’t tell method to make your lyrics paint a picture for the listener.
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Thank you for your feedback, I really appreciate it! But I do have a question or two for you. Could you give me a couple of examples of songs that use the show don’t tell me method?
Because as I see it there are lots of hit songs that use the ‘tell me method’ -Livin’ On A Prayer, Free Falling, I Can’t Help Falling In Love With You, I Will Always Love You are a few examples -and if you disagree, I’d REALLY like to know why! Please know I am NOT trying to be obnoxious, rather I am trying to learn.
Thank you again and be well,
Best,
Nancy