Our Love was like water
It filled my soul
It nourished my body
And mind even more
It rose to the clouds
Then rained back again
Stood out in a crowd
Ageless hearts, forever friends
Our Love was like water
At times it would bathe us
In a warm endless flow
At times it seemed frozen
With no place to go
Why did we hurt us
Sometimes you
Sometimes me
Then your touch would just melt
Us into We
Our Love was like water
Not a drop in the ocean
But the ocean in a drop
A Life full of devotion
A Love with no stop
Our Love was like water
You can’t live without
We were going to go together
Now I am here, and you are not
Through all the love and laughter
Your heart had become my home
After years of happy-ever-afters
Now I find myself alone
Our love was like water
As true as the ocean tide
As powerful as a surfer’s wave
Now gently, quietly it washes
Over your grave
Why can’t I still have Us
Missing you
Missing We
My heart aches for you and
Loves you so for loving me
Our love was like water
Not a drop in the ocean
But the ocean in a drop
A Love full of emotion
A Life lost full stop
I was so fortunate to have this submission make it to the shortlist last year. I have reworked it and think it is better than before. I just realized that resubmissions are allowed so I am sending it again and hopefully a new set of eyes can find its value. The Universe gave me these words, and my prayer is to make these lyrics a song so we can send it back to heaven.
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