2025 Competition Lyrics Entry:

The Dream by Ron

Lyrics

Here comes another sunny day
Another day without you…that’s what it really is

Used to be my heart felt nothing anyway,
but I’ve met you and nothing is the same

Had it gone another way, I wonder would you be here…
or was it just the right dream at the wrong time?

I hear the magic thunder scream
I see the sacred lightning flash across the northern sky
A thrashing rain comes crashing down
I close my eyes and all I hear is your sad “goodbye”
Had it gone another way, I wonder would you be here…
or was it just the wrong dream and the wrong time?


Clocks ticking…..years just fall away
Memories are all we have of our yesterdays
Whatever called you here to me?
What was I supposed to learn …
what was I supposed to see?
Had it gone another way, I wonder would you be here…
or was it just the right dream at the wrong time?
or was it just the wrong dream and the wrong time?

Author

Ron

Bio

singer, songwriter, musician, realtor, certified life coach

Co-author(s)

Lyrics Competition Results

Emotional Impact:
14/ 20
Technical Skill:
10/ 20
Memorability:
9/ 20
Storytelling:
9/ 20
Imagery:
8/ 20
Total Score:
50/ 100
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