2025 Competition Lyrics Entry:
Table Nine by Tracy Newman
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Lyrics
TABLE NINE
I work the night shift, he’s here now and then
He orders coffee and takes out a pen
I offer him paper, “No, this napkin is fine”
Says the man at table nine
He asks me my age, I’m twenty-one
He smiles and says, “How’d you get to be so young?”
I call him a flirt, he calls me sunshine
The man at table nine
Table nine’s in the back by the payphone
There’s always somebody whispering to me
“You know you’re waitin’ on the Okie from Muskogee”
I don’t know or even ask what that means
He just looks like a cowboy, kinda haggard and gray
They say he’s a singer, folks pay him to play
But I can’t imagine standing in line
To see the man at table nine
One rainy night he comes in with a guitar
Somebody asks him to play us a tune
We pull down the shades and gather around him
He sings until almost two
And when he’s done I bring him some pie
I say, “It’s on me for that song Mama Tried”
I ask, “Did you write it?” He says, “Every line”
I hand him a napkin, and ask him to sign
And when I get home I’m gonna find him on line
The man at table nine
I work the night shift, he’s here now and then
He orders coffee and takes out a pen
I offer him paper, “No, this napkin is fine”
Says the man at table nine
He asks me my age, I’m twenty-one
He smiles and says, “How’d you get to be so young?”
I call him a flirt, he calls me sunshine
The man at table nine
Table nine’s in the back by the payphone
There’s always somebody whispering to me
“You know you’re waitin’ on the Okie from Muskogee”
I don’t know or even ask what that means
He just looks like a cowboy, kinda haggard and gray
They say he’s a singer, folks pay him to play
But I can’t imagine standing in line
To see the man at table nine
One rainy night he comes in with a guitar
Somebody asks him to play us a tune
We pull down the shades and gather around him
He sings until almost two
And when he’s done I bring him some pie
I say, “It’s on me for that song Mama Tried”
I ask, “Did you write it?” He says, “Every line”
I hand him a napkin, and ask him to sign
And when I get home I’m gonna find him on line
The man at table nine
Author
Bio
Tracy Newman is a TV writer/producer and a singer/songwriter. In 1997, she and her writing partner, John Stark, won an Emmy and a Peabody Award for co-writing the “coming out” episode of Ellen. In 2001 they created the ABC comedy, According to Jim, which ran for eight seasons. Tracy has played guitar since she was 14. Her CDs with her band Tracy Newman and the Reinforcements are “A Place in the Sun,” “I Just See You,” and “That’s What Love Can Do to Your Heart.” www.tracynewman.com. She also has three CDs for children through her company called RunAlongHome.
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Lyrics Competition Results
Emotional Impact:
19/ 20
Technical Skill:
17/ 20
Memorability:
17/ 20
Storytelling:
20/ 20
Imagery:
17/ 20
Total Score:
90/ 100
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Comments:
Beautiful use of imagery and storytelling. I know when a lyric is good as it plays like a movie in my head. Yours absolutely did.
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wow i thought these lyrics were really fantastic. i loved the first verse and then when the twist happened i loved that too. amazing
Thank you, Michael!
Thank you so much!