Venus Attax are an alternative female four piece with an eclectic indie sound fusing harmonies with elements of punk, rock and folk.
Recently described as ‘Whimsically folk rock hybrid but there’s some steely determination in their lyrics’. This is their world and they care about it’.
Co-author(s)
Angela Collins
Lyrics Competition Results
Emotional Impact:
14/ 20
Technical Skill:
10/ 20
Memorability:
14/ 20
Storytelling:
11/ 20
Imagery:
9/ 20
Total Score:
58/ 100
Commended
Comments:
I love the feel of these lyrics! They are unapologetically bold and are really uplifting.
To be used at Pride events across the world!
Thank you for the feedback comments which echoed exactly how I would want the song to sound, ‘unapologetically bold and uplifting’.
The lower score in relation to imagery is interesting, I will give that some thought.
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Thank you for the feedback comments which echoed exactly how I would want the song to sound, ‘unapologetically bold and uplifting’.
The lower score in relation to imagery is interesting, I will give that some thought.