2025 Competition Lyrics Entry:
Lucy by Rick Poplawski
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Lyrics
Lucy came around today
That girl is so damn hot
Flirtin with that flashing smile
She gives it all she’s got
A demon in a split dress
Long legs so silky smooth
By the time you get to thinkin
She’s already made her move
Can’t get enough of Lucy
She’s gonna eat you up
You just don’t mess with Lucy
She won’t have you
Make the cut
Huh
Your’e gonna miss the cut
All the guys keep movin
The girls might try their luck
But Lucy plays her own game
Don’t wanna get in no ruck
She’ll chew you up
And spit you out
Tearin through you
Like a storm
Don’t cross that girl
Not Lucy
You’ll wish that
You weren’t born
Man…
Your’e gonna wish that
You weren’t born
Aint no other hot chicks
Gettin close to havin
That girl’s hold
Keep her hot
With your intentions
Or that girl’s
Gonna drop you cold
Yeah
That girl will drop you cold
Can’t get enough of Lucy
She’s gonna eat you up
You just don’t mess with Lucy
She won’t have you
Make the cut
You aint never gonna
Make that cut
I didn’t have to try with Lucy
Already had a mind to play
You never give a no
To Lucy
Gettin lucky if she’ll even stay
A demon in a split dress
Long legs so silky smooth
By the time you get to thinkin
She’s already made her move
Can’t get enough of Lucy
She’s gonna eat you up
You just don’ t mess with Lucy
She won’t have
You make the cut
Can’t get enough of Lucy
That girl’s gonna eat you up
You just don’t mess with Lucy
She won’t have you
Make the cut
Oh Lucy…
You can come over any time girl…
Ready for you any day…
Can’t get enough of Lucy…
Can’t get enough of Lucy…
Can’t get enough of Lucy…
No…
Let’s go with that girl Lucy…….
That girl is so damn hot
Flirtin with that flashing smile
She gives it all she’s got
A demon in a split dress
Long legs so silky smooth
By the time you get to thinkin
She’s already made her move
Can’t get enough of Lucy
She’s gonna eat you up
You just don’t mess with Lucy
She won’t have you
Make the cut
Huh
Your’e gonna miss the cut
All the guys keep movin
The girls might try their luck
But Lucy plays her own game
Don’t wanna get in no ruck
She’ll chew you up
And spit you out
Tearin through you
Like a storm
Don’t cross that girl
Not Lucy
You’ll wish that
You weren’t born
Man…
Your’e gonna wish that
You weren’t born
Aint no other hot chicks
Gettin close to havin
That girl’s hold
Keep her hot
With your intentions
Or that girl’s
Gonna drop you cold
Yeah
That girl will drop you cold
Can’t get enough of Lucy
She’s gonna eat you up
You just don’t mess with Lucy
She won’t have you
Make the cut
You aint never gonna
Make that cut
I didn’t have to try with Lucy
Already had a mind to play
You never give a no
To Lucy
Gettin lucky if she’ll even stay
A demon in a split dress
Long legs so silky smooth
By the time you get to thinkin
She’s already made her move
Can’t get enough of Lucy
She’s gonna eat you up
You just don’ t mess with Lucy
She won’t have
You make the cut
Can’t get enough of Lucy
That girl’s gonna eat you up
You just don’t mess with Lucy
She won’t have you
Make the cut
Oh Lucy…
You can come over any time girl…
Ready for you any day…
Can’t get enough of Lucy…
Can’t get enough of Lucy…
Can’t get enough of Lucy…
No…
Let’s go with that girl Lucy…….
Author
Bio
Started writing Lyrics in Oct 2024
Over 100 songs to date which have been brought to life with AI assistance re music and vocals.
Over 100 songs to date which have been brought to life with AI assistance re music and vocals.
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Lyrics Competition Results
Emotional Impact:
11/ 20
Technical Skill:
9/ 20
Memorability:
6/ 20
Storytelling:
11/ 20
Imagery:
9/ 20
Total Score:
46/ 100
Comments:
I like the image of Lucy in the split dress.
Perhaps tell us a bit about why Lucy is like this and you won’t make the cut.
Perhaps tell us a bit about why Lucy is like this and you won’t make the cut.
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Many thanks.
Not making the cut would refer to the control that this woman of substance would have over not only you, but also over that to which she can afford to pick and choose from.