2025 Competition Lyrics Entry:
Lonely by Colin Wilson
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LONELY by C.Wilson
Lonely, in a room full of people
How can I not feel this way
I try to find someone
To make my days warmer
And then I let her walk away
We could, have been so good together
The place I could have stayed forever
If only I could see her now
In our hearts the things that matter
Hit the ground in pieces shatter
If only I could hold her now
Lonely, in a world full of people
How can I not feel this way
I tried to find the girl
To make my life better
And I wonder what she did today
There could never be another
Patient friend and easy lover
If only I could see her now
In our hearts the things that matter
Hit the ground in pieces shatter
If only I could hold her now
We are both alone together
It makes no sense to say forever
If only I could see her now
In our hearts the things that matter
Hit the ground in pieces shatter
If only I could hold her now
Lonely, in a room full of people
How can I not feel this way
I try to find someone
To make my days warmer
And then I let her walk away
We could, have been so good together
The place I could have stayed forever
If only I could see her now
In our hearts the things that matter
Hit the ground in pieces shatter
If only I could hold her now
Lonely, in a world full of people
How can I not feel this way
I tried to find the girl
To make my life better
And I wonder what she did today
There could never be another
Patient friend and easy lover
If only I could see her now
In our hearts the things that matter
Hit the ground in pieces shatter
If only I could hold her now
We are both alone together
It makes no sense to say forever
If only I could see her now
In our hearts the things that matter
Hit the ground in pieces shatter
If only I could hold her now
Author
Bio
My name is Colin Wilson and I am 63 years of age.
I emigrated to the UK from Australia in 1993 and was a member of a successful tribute band from then until 2016.
In recent years I have been writing and recording songs for my own pleasure in a small bedroom studio.
I emigrated to the UK from Australia in 1993 and was a member of a successful tribute band from then until 2016.
In recent years I have been writing and recording songs for my own pleasure in a small bedroom studio.
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Lyrics Competition Results
Emotional Impact:
13/ 20
Technical Skill:
11/ 20
Memorability:
7/ 20
Storytelling:
11/ 20
Imagery:
6/ 20
Total Score:
48/ 100
Comments:
Some nice storytelling moments. Try to use the show don’t tell method so your lyrics have more variety.
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