2025 Competition Lyrics Entry:
Let Me Love You by Ron in LA
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Lyrics
It looks like we are caught up in an act
Let’s stop this before it’s too late to turn back
I know I’d miss you, I know you’d think of me
Let’s make a go of it, even if it’s unsuccessfully
I’ve got this dream, it comes to me every night
And honey, what a scene, to have it all work out just right
You let me love you,
I let you love me,
not a single threat of goodbye
and not a trace of jealousy
Looks like we’ve caught up with our final act
We cannot turn around, we can’t go back
You’re gonna miss me,
I’m gonna think of you
I can’t believe it’s over, but what else can we do
There was a time
We were satisfied and true
Somewhere along the line you lied to me
and I lied to you
You let me love you,
I let you love me,
not a single threat of goodbye
and not a trace of jealousy
You let me love you,
I let you love me,
not a single threat of goodbye
and not a trace of jealousy
Not a single threat of goodbye
and not a trace of jealousy
Let’s stop this before it’s too late to turn back
I know I’d miss you, I know you’d think of me
Let’s make a go of it, even if it’s unsuccessfully
I’ve got this dream, it comes to me every night
And honey, what a scene, to have it all work out just right
You let me love you,
I let you love me,
not a single threat of goodbye
and not a trace of jealousy
Looks like we’ve caught up with our final act
We cannot turn around, we can’t go back
You’re gonna miss me,
I’m gonna think of you
I can’t believe it’s over, but what else can we do
There was a time
We were satisfied and true
Somewhere along the line you lied to me
and I lied to you
You let me love you,
I let you love me,
not a single threat of goodbye
and not a trace of jealousy
You let me love you,
I let you love me,
not a single threat of goodbye
and not a trace of jealousy
Not a single threat of goodbye
and not a trace of jealousy
Lyrics Competition Results
Emotional Impact:
13/ 20
Technical Skill:
12/ 20
Memorability:
15/ 20
Storytelling:
14/ 20
Imagery:
13/ 20
Total Score:
67/ 100
Commended
Comments:
Clear storytelling and emotional arc. Maybe work on some of the rhymes so they don’t feel as obvious.
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