2025 Competition Lyrics Entry:
Is Anybody Listening? by Susan Rose Simms
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Lyrics
IS ANYBODY LISTENING?©
By, Susan Rose Simms
VERSE
He opens up the paper
To see what it has to say-
“Hundreds of people
Were killed just yesterday,”
In a war, a terrorist bombing,
Or another hijacked plane;
We’re all affected even if
It’s half a world away
CHORUS
Hey out there, is anybody listening?
It’s a real short trip to the grave from the christening.
Think ‘bout all you got,
Don’t dwell on what you’re missing.
Hey out there…….. is anybody listening?
VERSE
She doesn’t need to look much further
Than her neighborhood,
People there just ain’t acting
Like she knows they should.
They’re fighting, stealing, dealing….
Claiming they’re misunderstood.
She wants to scream out loud
If it would do any good……
CHORUS
Hey out there, is anybody listening?
It’s a real short trip to the grave from the christening.
Think ‘bout what you got,
Don’t dwell on what you’re missing.
Hey out there…….. is anybody listening?
BRIDGE
Why does it have to cost a life, just to understand,
We’re here to love our neighbors, so take them by the hand…..
MODULATED CHORUS
Hey out there everyone, start listening!
It’s too short a trip to the grave from the christening.
Think about all the things you got,
Not on what you’re missing.
Hey out there…….. is anybody listening?
By, Susan Rose Simms
VERSE
He opens up the paper
To see what it has to say-
“Hundreds of people
Were killed just yesterday,”
In a war, a terrorist bombing,
Or another hijacked plane;
We’re all affected even if
It’s half a world away
CHORUS
Hey out there, is anybody listening?
It’s a real short trip to the grave from the christening.
Think ‘bout all you got,
Don’t dwell on what you’re missing.
Hey out there…….. is anybody listening?
VERSE
She doesn’t need to look much further
Than her neighborhood,
People there just ain’t acting
Like she knows they should.
They’re fighting, stealing, dealing….
Claiming they’re misunderstood.
She wants to scream out loud
If it would do any good……
CHORUS
Hey out there, is anybody listening?
It’s a real short trip to the grave from the christening.
Think ‘bout what you got,
Don’t dwell on what you’re missing.
Hey out there…….. is anybody listening?
BRIDGE
Why does it have to cost a life, just to understand,
We’re here to love our neighbors, so take them by the hand…..
MODULATED CHORUS
Hey out there everyone, start listening!
It’s too short a trip to the grave from the christening.
Think about all the things you got,
Not on what you’re missing.
Hey out there…….. is anybody listening?
Author
Bio
My name is Susan Rose Simms and I’m a children’s book and educational products freelance writer. My background is as a speech and language pathologist. I’ve produced children’s books and won a Parents’ Choice Award for my rhyming interactive board book, “Let’s Take a Trip,” published by YES! Entertainment. I have eleven rhyming E books published with Houghton Mifflin Harcourt. I’ve written educational reproducible workbooks, games, apps, ebooks, card sets, fiction and non-fiction hi-lo readers for elementary school children and teens…. and more! Two of my books are with licensed characters…Lamb Chop and Tiny Toons.
In 1997, My writing Partner Jack Fischer, and I won the TNN County Songwriting Contest, and were flown to Nashville to be on Gary Chapman’s Nashville Now. (both now defunct!)
I won the May/June lyric contest in American Songwriter Magazine. I have five rhyming books coming out with Wonder House. One, “Counting Train Track” is already available on Amazon.
Please see my website https://susanrosesimms.com to see my published work.
In 1997, My writing Partner Jack Fischer, and I won the TNN County Songwriting Contest, and were flown to Nashville to be on Gary Chapman’s Nashville Now. (both now defunct!)
I won the May/June lyric contest in American Songwriter Magazine. I have five rhyming books coming out with Wonder House. One, “Counting Train Track” is already available on Amazon.
Please see my website https://susanrosesimms.com to see my published work.
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Lyrics Competition Results
Emotional Impact:
16/ 20
Technical Skill:
14/ 20
Memorability:
10/ 20
Storytelling:
14/ 20
Imagery:
5/ 20
Total Score:
59/ 100
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Comments:
Some nice storytelling moments. Try to use the show don’t tell method so your lyrics have more variety.
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