I am old, my fibres dry
Familiar husks are splitting and splintered
Hands more claws
Jaw bones protrude
Flesh shrinks, skin sucked inwards
I am aware of my bones
Their lengths bowed and creaking
Articulations slower to lubricate
Chorus
I stand more still now
My spiny hairs still rustle
As warm winds cool,
And the wrinkled skin’s dry scales
Outline the scars and darkened dents
Of my bodies history
Chorus
And below me lies the juice
Of laughter and light and love,
My children’s sing song voices
Joining the skylark and rasping gull
The swift, colourful paints of play
Music and dancing spirits feed
The pool of sustenance
The fecund juices of love and kin
Of community and dreams
Chorus
My skin pod dries and stiffens
And deep within the pond
Heart waters like frogspawn shine
Glistening and nurtured
By memories and wisdom
Joined loosely, squirming alive
As tadpole stories hatch
Im a performer who has worked as an acrobat and mime artist for 40 years. I write songs and poetry and perform musical poetry.
I enclose a selection of lyrics.
Co-author(s)
Lyrics Competition Results
Emotional Impact:
18/ 20
Technical Skill:
15/ 20
Memorability:
17/ 20
Storytelling:
18/ 20
Imagery:
17/ 20
Total Score:
85/ 100
Commended
Comments:
Absolutely stunning imagery, and such a beautiful ending of the idea of new life.
This feels more like a poem than a song to me, I think I would need to hear it with music to see how it fits.
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