2025 Competition Lyrics Entry:
FIRST SIGHT by Bud Leech
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FIRST SIGHT
I’LL NEVER FORGET
THE DAT WE MET
TO MY DELIGHT
IT WAS LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT
WELL, IT WAS FOR ME ANYWAY
BUT YOU DISAGREED
UNTIL WE’D DANCED THE NIGHT AWAY
IT’S BEEN HEAVEN SENT
EVER SINCE
WITH NOT A WORD IF DISSENT
WELL, OK, THERE HAVE BEEN JUST A FEW
THAT’S TRUE
BUT I’LL TELL YOU THIS
IT BEEN ABSOLUTE BLISS
ESPECIALLY WHEN WE’VE KISSED
WE’VE BEEN THROUGH THICK AND THIN
COME WHAT MAY
AND WE’LL STAY TOGETH NO MATTER
FOREVER AND A DAY
YOU KNOW YOU’VE BEEN THE LOVE OF MY LIFE
I’M SO HAPPY YOU FELL IN LOVE WITH ME THAT NIGHT
AND I WAS SO RIGHT
TO LOVE YOU
AT FIRST SIGHT
I’LL NEVER FORGET
THE DAT WE MET
TO MY DELIGHT
IT WAS LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT
WELL, IT WAS FOR ME ANYWAY
BUT YOU DISAGREED
UNTIL WE’D DANCED THE NIGHT AWAY
IT’S BEEN HEAVEN SENT
EVER SINCE
WITH NOT A WORD IF DISSENT
WELL, OK, THERE HAVE BEEN JUST A FEW
THAT’S TRUE
BUT I’LL TELL YOU THIS
IT BEEN ABSOLUTE BLISS
ESPECIALLY WHEN WE’VE KISSED
WE’VE BEEN THROUGH THICK AND THIN
COME WHAT MAY
AND WE’LL STAY TOGETH NO MATTER
FOREVER AND A DAY
YOU KNOW YOU’VE BEEN THE LOVE OF MY LIFE
I’M SO HAPPY YOU FELL IN LOVE WITH ME THAT NIGHT
AND I WAS SO RIGHT
TO LOVE YOU
AT FIRST SIGHT
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Lyrics Competition Results
Emotional Impact:
10/ 20
Technical Skill:
8/ 20
Memorability:
5/ 20
Storytelling:
8/ 20
Imagery:
8/ 20
Total Score:
39/ 100
Comments:
I think we need a bit more storytelling here. Try using the show don’t tell method to paint an image in the mind or the listener.
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Of course, I’ll never forget the DAY we met.
It was the DAY we met
I’ll never forget!
FIRST SIGHT
LOVE
WAS YOURS TOO?
OOBVY DOOBBY DOO