Standing tall amongst your golden crowns
A million faces lifted to the sky
Looking east where the sun has risen
Watching the world pass you by
Searching for the light, on the darkest days
Towering above me, full of cheer
Heads bowing gently to the August breeze
I’ve found a piece of heaven right here
Chorus
Field upon field, I am surrounded
By your splendour and beauty shining bright
Field upon field, there are no boundaries
You bring hope and inspiration to my life
I want to join your congregation
Be a part of the joy you create
Radiant and strong, somewhere to belong
I’m lifted up by being in this place
Chorus
Bridge
Sunflowers, Sunflowers, as far as I can see
I feel your presence carrying me
Sunflowers, Sunflowers, reaching up high
I’m here amongst your sunshine, beneath a cloudy sky
I’ve been writing songs on and off since my late teens. I’ve written more over the last 2 years, after become a member of Talent is Timeless.
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Lyrics Competition Results
Emotional Impact:
17/ 20
Technical Skill:
15/ 20
Memorability:
14/ 20
Storytelling:
17/ 20
Imagery:
17/ 20
Total Score:
80/ 100
Commended
Comments:
Beautiful use of imagery. I was right there in the sunflower field enjoying the view.
I think the only thing you could add is what the sunflowers mean / represent to you. Is it hope? Reaching for the light?
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