2025 Competition Lyrics Entry:
Castaways by Kevin Cochran
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Lyrics
Over the rise the reflectors guide me on this night highway
Looking down on the sleepy town like stars in the Milky Way
In ’85 she came alive and sparked my wandering ways
But the winds were strong and the days were long for this romantic runaway
Over the rise no signal can stop me because the route is my own way
I’m a troubadour of sorts, it’s only time I extort, living years in the month of May
Like authors will suspended still in sounds that secretly say
As time goes by and as people die, the words they write remain
Over the rise an eternity behind me in streams of the bluest bays
Filled with hopes so swift and of dreams adrift, like wakes in the waterways
Remember the time toasting Belgian wine to women and their ways
And of love and sex and of peace ‘til death and to glory without delay
Over the rise our futures lie on an island of castaways
Where Emerson and Thoreau and Robinson Crusoe memorialize our days
In 2081 our sons of sons will ponder their yesterdays
And the nights and songs, and their rights and wrongs, and of God and sacred ways
Looking down on the sleepy town like stars in the Milky Way
In ’85 she came alive and sparked my wandering ways
But the winds were strong and the days were long for this romantic runaway
Over the rise no signal can stop me because the route is my own way
I’m a troubadour of sorts, it’s only time I extort, living years in the month of May
Like authors will suspended still in sounds that secretly say
As time goes by and as people die, the words they write remain
Over the rise an eternity behind me in streams of the bluest bays
Filled with hopes so swift and of dreams adrift, like wakes in the waterways
Remember the time toasting Belgian wine to women and their ways
And of love and sex and of peace ‘til death and to glory without delay
Over the rise our futures lie on an island of castaways
Where Emerson and Thoreau and Robinson Crusoe memorialize our days
In 2081 our sons of sons will ponder their yesterdays
And the nights and songs, and their rights and wrongs, and of God and sacred ways
Author
Bio
I self-taught myself to play the guitar in college, taking after my housemate Bix Weir who would perform his original music at a local pub. We were influenced by Jackson Browne, James Taylor, Cat Stevens, Bruce Springsteen, U2, and other rock-folk musicians. I wrote my first song then and hadn’t stopped until I got married in 2004 and started a family.
I had performed at a local café in the 90’s and headlined for a couple years at Earth Day in Newport Beach. These days I occasionally play for family and friends and look forward to hosting regular guitar parties like I did in the old days 🙂
I had performed at a local café in the 90’s and headlined for a couple years at Earth Day in Newport Beach. These days I occasionally play for family and friends and look forward to hosting regular guitar parties like I did in the old days 🙂
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Lyrics Competition Results
Emotional Impact:
18/ 20
Technical Skill:
17/ 20
Memorability:
18/ 20
Storytelling:
20/ 20
Imagery:
18/ 20
Total Score:
91/ 100
Commended
Comments:
Such a compelling and well-told story. The use of imagery and clever turns of phrase really stood out to me. Well done!
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