2025 Competition Lyrics Entry:

Blunt Force Heart Trauma by Ron

Lyrics

I used to act tough but I’m down for the count,
still asking myself “what was that all about?”
I’ve opened my eyes I’m taking the prize

And here’s an idea off the top of my head,
I’ll love you forever, yeh, that’s what I said
I’m coming to you I’m coming with you

I find as life passes I’ve less time for crisis,
hassles, slighting, power-play fighting
I tell you I’m thru I tell you I’m thru

The chaos, the drama, the blunt-force heart trauma
are all in the past, I’ve found love at last
I’m lookin’ at you There’s no one but you

Hold me, come here hold me…
Hold me love me hold me now…

I’m heading your way…leave your keys by the gate
I’ll be there in no time, no reason to wait
This is our time and I’m feeling fine

And one more idea off the top of my head…
Love me forever…yeh…that’s what I said
I’m coming to you, I’m coming with you

Hold me, come here hold me…
Hold me love me hold me now…

Author

Ron

Bio

Singer, songwriter, musician, realtor, certified life coach

Co-author(s)

Lyrics Competition Results

Emotional Impact:
9/ 20
Technical Skill:
10/ 20
Memorability:
7/ 20
Storytelling:
8/ 20
Imagery:
8/ 20
Total Score:
42/ 100

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