Singer, songwriter, musician, realtor, certified life coach
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Lyrics Competition Results
Emotional Impact:
9/ 20
Technical Skill:
10/ 20
Memorability:
7/ 20
Storytelling:
8/ 20
Imagery:
8/ 20
Total Score:
42/ 100
Comments:
The term “blunt force heart trauma” is amazing. They really paint a picture. Some of the other lyrics could benefit from that treatment too, a little more “show don’t tell” would improve the quality of the song.
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