2025 Competition Lyrics Entry:
Best Intentions by Wendy Jeans
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Lyrics
Yesterday, I wanted to say….
But my own words they got in the way
Many days, I wanted to do….
But somehow, again, I failed to come through
Everyday, I wanted to laugh…
But emptiness caused me to choke on the draught…
And most days that I tried to dance…
Life had decided it had other plans !
CHORUS 1
So I shouldn’t, couldn’t, can’t and I don’t
Drop the armour, ever, let myself venture out
Will never be able to get past the doubt
And that’s why I’m stuck here forever and won’t
BRIDGE
But somewhere inside something screams – let me out !
Like I’ll never be heard, even though I may shout !
Some part of me wants so bad to be seen –
So then why do I hide like I’m trapped in between?
If only I could believe in me ….
And one day, I wanted to know,
An ideal way to savour a rainbow;
I tried to take a great picture –
But It’s essence was lost, the colours a mixture –
So from today, until I die,
I’ll open wide these cynical eyes;
Rainbows aren’t mine to capture –
But rather a source for my soul to find rapture ;
Chorus 2
So I should and I could, I can and I will;
Dare to be me and be bold and fulfilled
I can walk past old me, leaving nothing but dust
I can be my own hero and in me, I can trust
All the days, I’m wide awake now,
Leaving the door open, I can allow;
It seems I’ve been the only thing –
That stands in the way of all that I bring
On this day, I know just what to do;
I’ll step out of my way, and let myself through;
I’ll try and avoid all the land mines –
But I’m tired of living my life from the sidelines ….
Chorus 2
So I should and I could, I can and I will;
Dare to be me and be bold and fulfilled
I can walk past old me, leaving nothing but dust
I can be my own hero and in me, I can trust
But my own words they got in the way
Many days, I wanted to do….
But somehow, again, I failed to come through
Everyday, I wanted to laugh…
But emptiness caused me to choke on the draught…
And most days that I tried to dance…
Life had decided it had other plans !
CHORUS 1
So I shouldn’t, couldn’t, can’t and I don’t
Drop the armour, ever, let myself venture out
Will never be able to get past the doubt
And that’s why I’m stuck here forever and won’t
BRIDGE
But somewhere inside something screams – let me out !
Like I’ll never be heard, even though I may shout !
Some part of me wants so bad to be seen –
So then why do I hide like I’m trapped in between?
If only I could believe in me ….
And one day, I wanted to know,
An ideal way to savour a rainbow;
I tried to take a great picture –
But It’s essence was lost, the colours a mixture –
So from today, until I die,
I’ll open wide these cynical eyes;
Rainbows aren’t mine to capture –
But rather a source for my soul to find rapture ;
Chorus 2
So I should and I could, I can and I will;
Dare to be me and be bold and fulfilled
I can walk past old me, leaving nothing but dust
I can be my own hero and in me, I can trust
All the days, I’m wide awake now,
Leaving the door open, I can allow;
It seems I’ve been the only thing –
That stands in the way of all that I bring
On this day, I know just what to do;
I’ll step out of my way, and let myself through;
I’ll try and avoid all the land mines –
But I’m tired of living my life from the sidelines ….
Chorus 2
So I should and I could, I can and I will;
Dare to be me and be bold and fulfilled
I can walk past old me, leaving nothing but dust
I can be my own hero and in me, I can trust
Author
Bio
Hi I’m Wendy Jeans, singer, song-writer new to the music scene. It wasn’t until later in life that I re-ignited my passion for creating. I just released my debut EP last week.
https://lnk.to/jNfT5dPo Life’s a Journey!
https://lnk.to/jNfT5dPo Life’s a Journey!
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Lyrics Competition Results
Emotional Impact:
9/ 20
Technical Skill:
10/ 20
Memorability:
7/ 20
Storytelling:
9/ 20
Imagery:
9/ 20
Total Score:
44/ 100
Comments:
The song has a lovely sentiment but the story telling could be clearer so the listener can understand your story.
Maybe try using the show don’t tell method as it will elevate your lyric writing and take you to the next level.
Maybe try using the show don’t tell method as it will elevate your lyric writing and take you to the next level.
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Thank you so much for this feedback and for your consideration. I agree with your assessment. 😉