2025 Competition Lyrics Entry:
An Angel Disappeared by Ronald Kemp
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Lyrics
[Verse]
I think about you every day,
and the reasons why you went away.
words cant tell you how I feel,
oh I pray to God this cant be real.
this was never in our plan,
and now I’m just a broken man.
no one can even tell me why,
I can’t help but hang my head and cry.
[Chorus]
you were here and now your gone
and the entire worlds all wrong.
I see you sitting in your chair
and blink my eyes and your not there.
can’t you hear the cries amidst the tears…
an angel disappeared.
[Verse 2]
I know the pain will ease with time
but that wont help my state of mind.
cause now is when I need you here
to hold my hand and dry my tears.
to help me make it through the night
and tell me everything’s alright.
that your ok and with old friends
until the day we meet again.
[Chorus]
you were here and now your gone
and the entire worlds all wrong.
I see you sitting in your chair
and blink my eyes and your not there.
can’t you hear the cries amidst the tears…
an angel disappeared.
[Verse 3]
your love is all I’ve ever known
and now I’m left here all alone
replaying memories of our past
that I now know couldn’t last
and wondering what I could have done
to keep you here among loved ones
whose broken hearts and flowing tears,
know today an angel disappeared
[Chorus]
you were here and now your gone
and the entire worlds all wrong.
I see you sitting in your chair
and blink my eyes and your not there.
can’t you hear the cries amidst the tears…
an angel disappeared.
An Angel disappeared
oh ohhh an angel disappeared
an angel disappeared
I think about you every day,
and the reasons why you went away.
words cant tell you how I feel,
oh I pray to God this cant be real.
this was never in our plan,
and now I’m just a broken man.
no one can even tell me why,
I can’t help but hang my head and cry.
[Chorus]
you were here and now your gone
and the entire worlds all wrong.
I see you sitting in your chair
and blink my eyes and your not there.
can’t you hear the cries amidst the tears…
an angel disappeared.
[Verse 2]
I know the pain will ease with time
but that wont help my state of mind.
cause now is when I need you here
to hold my hand and dry my tears.
to help me make it through the night
and tell me everything’s alright.
that your ok and with old friends
until the day we meet again.
[Chorus]
you were here and now your gone
and the entire worlds all wrong.
I see you sitting in your chair
and blink my eyes and your not there.
can’t you hear the cries amidst the tears…
an angel disappeared.
[Verse 3]
your love is all I’ve ever known
and now I’m left here all alone
replaying memories of our past
that I now know couldn’t last
and wondering what I could have done
to keep you here among loved ones
whose broken hearts and flowing tears,
know today an angel disappeared
[Chorus]
you were here and now your gone
and the entire worlds all wrong.
I see you sitting in your chair
and blink my eyes and your not there.
can’t you hear the cries amidst the tears…
an angel disappeared.
An Angel disappeared
oh ohhh an angel disappeared
an angel disappeared
Author
Bio
Just someone who likes putting their feelings and emotions into words.
the following was written the night I lost my wife of 17 years to cancer.
the following was written the night I lost my wife of 17 years to cancer.
Co-author(s)
Lyrics Competition Results
Emotional Impact:
9/ 20
Technical Skill:
11/ 20
Memorability:
6/ 20
Storytelling:
11/ 20
Imagery:
8/ 20
Total Score:
45/ 100
Commended
Comments:
Some nice storytelling moments. Try to use the show don’t tell method so your lyrics have more variety.
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LOL these are the lyrics to the song I entered in the Song competition, Round 1 lyrics 29 of 30, Round 2 Lyrics 27 of 30 No music…45 out of 100, there is no consistency in trying to judge lyrics alone. the opinions have no intellectual merit might as well be grading on punctuation only