2025 Competition Lyrics Entry:
Broken Toys by Ron
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Lyrics
From the land of broken toys
Home of the maligned
Comes a wind of change
An air so pure it gives you life
So sad, so sweet, you want to cry
It whispers it’s secret lie
Mysteries so dark and deep
Unfold beyond our sight
Doubt them if you dare
Is there only endless sleep
within eternal light?
Or is there nothing there?
Home of the maligned
Comes a wind of change
An air so pure it gives you life
So sad, so sweet, you want to cry
It whispers it’s secret lie
Mysteries so dark and deep
Unfold beyond our sight
Doubt them if you dare
Is there only endless sleep
within eternal light?
Or is there nothing there?
Author
Bio
songwriter, singer, musician, real estate agent, certified life coach
Co-author(s)
Brad Webster
Lyrics Competition Results
Emotional Impact:
10/ 20
Technical Skill:
9/ 20
Memorability:
6/ 20
Storytelling:
7/ 20
Imagery:
16/ 20
Total Score:
48/ 100
Comments:
I can’t really tell what the story is about but I like the imagery you have used. It creates a haunting scene.
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