2025 Competition Lyrics Entry:
THAT MOMENT OF BLISS by Bud Leech
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THAT MOMENT OF BLISS
THAT MOMENT OF BLISS
WHEN WE FIRST KISSED
DO YOU REMEMBER
THAT FEELING INSIDE,
WE COULDN’T HIDE
IN JUNE OR SEPTEMBER
DO RECALL THE START OF IT ALL
THAT DAY IN DECEMBER
CAN YOU BRING IT TO MIND
THE NIGHT WE FIRST DINED
IN MAY OR WAS IT IN NOVEMBERl
MY MEMORY IS SO HAZY BABY
YOU’VE SENT ME LOVE CRAZY
BUT I DO REMEMBER THE NIGHT WE MET.
IT’S INDELIBLY SET
I’LL NEVER FORGET
IT WAS SO TENDER (FIRST TIME)
THAT MOMENT OF BLISS
WHEN WE KISSED
DO YOU REMEMBER
(SECOND TIME)
THAT MOMENT OF BLISS
WE NEARLY MISSED
OF COURSE YOU REMEMBER
THAT MOMENT OF BLISS
WHEN WE FIRST KISSED
DO YOU REMEMBER
THAT FEELING INSIDE,
WE COULDN’T HIDE
IN JUNE OR SEPTEMBER
DO RECALL THE START OF IT ALL
THAT DAY IN DECEMBER
CAN YOU BRING IT TO MIND
THE NIGHT WE FIRST DINED
IN MAY OR WAS IT IN NOVEMBERl
MY MEMORY IS SO HAZY BABY
YOU’VE SENT ME LOVE CRAZY
BUT I DO REMEMBER THE NIGHT WE MET.
IT’S INDELIBLY SET
I’LL NEVER FORGET
IT WAS SO TENDER (FIRST TIME)
THAT MOMENT OF BLISS
WHEN WE KISSED
DO YOU REMEMBER
(SECOND TIME)
THAT MOMENT OF BLISS
WE NEARLY MISSED
OF COURSE YOU REMEMBER
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Lyrics Competition Results
Emotional Impact:
7/ 20
Technical Skill:
5/ 20
Memorability:
5/ 20
Storytelling:
9/ 20
Imagery:
7/ 20
Total Score:
33/ 100
Comments:
Nice message in the song and something a lot of people can connect with.
Maybe try the show don’t tell method to elevate your writing.
Maybe try the show don’t tell method to elevate your writing.
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