2025 Competition Lyrics Entry:

Whiskey n cigarettes by Peter Gray

Lyrics

Checkin’ signs n symbols
not diggin’ what I ploughed
I split n quit the family farm
to fit in with the crowd.
I got a job bar tendin’
pretendin’ life was cool
then worked my way to Oceanside
a bay view and a pool

I play where the sun sets
whiskey n cigarettes
not very complex
whiskey n cigarettes

Big city brought me trouble,
the sort you leave behind,
had two good women lovin’ me
their brothers weren’t too kind
I moved but couldn’t settle
my lovers came n went
I got real high and sometimes low
but never got content

I play where the sun sets
whiskey n cigarettes
not very complex
whiskey n cigarettes

Sometimes you get to runnin’
Sometimes you wonder why
and what’s the use in seeing folk
if just to say goodbye.
ten years since I left you
I caught the same bus home
this time I’m not for quittin’
so why d’ya have to roam?

I play where the sun sets
whiskey n cigarettes
not very complex
whiskey n cigarettes

I play where the sun sets
whiskey n cigarettes
not very complex
whiskey n cigarettes (to fade)

Author

Bio

Looking for someone to bring some of my songs to life

Co-author(s)

Lyrics Competition Results

Emotional Impact:
19/ 20
Technical Skill:
17/ 20
Memorability:
15/ 20
Storytelling:
16/ 20
Imagery:
14/ 20
Total Score:
81/ 100
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