2025 Competition Lyrics Entry:
Daddy by Naomi Nozoe
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Lyrics
I remember distant days, when you seemed so far away
Mom and Dad, they couldn’t stay, so you let her lead the way
But you stood tall through the waves, never showed the pain you braved
Now I see the love you gave, in your silent, steadfast way
You keep standing when the big waves hit you
You move forward in the heavy storm
You act as normal within the hardship
Now I understand, your heart kept us warm
Years have passed and I’ve grown, I’ve faced troubles of my own
Looking back, I’ve always known, your strength was my cornerstone
Your sacrifices, often unseen, your love was in between the scenes
Now I carry what you’ve been, proud to say, I’m your dream
You keep standing when the big waves hit you
You move forward in the heavy storm
You act as normal within the hardship
Now I understand, your heart kept us warm
Every battle that you fought, every lesson that you taught
Now I see, it wasn’t for naught, your love was the anchor I sought
I was watching, though I didn’t know, your silent strength helped me grow
In your footsteps, now I go, your legacy within me flows
You keep standing when the big waves hit you
You move forward in the heavy storm
You act as normal within the hardship
Now I understand, your heart kept us warm
Daddy, now I see your fight, how you kept us in your sight
Through the dark and through the light,
you were my guiding star so bright
In your love, I find my might,
proud to carry on your life
Mom and Dad, they couldn’t stay, so you let her lead the way
But you stood tall through the waves, never showed the pain you braved
Now I see the love you gave, in your silent, steadfast way
You keep standing when the big waves hit you
You move forward in the heavy storm
You act as normal within the hardship
Now I understand, your heart kept us warm
Years have passed and I’ve grown, I’ve faced troubles of my own
Looking back, I’ve always known, your strength was my cornerstone
Your sacrifices, often unseen, your love was in between the scenes
Now I carry what you’ve been, proud to say, I’m your dream
You keep standing when the big waves hit you
You move forward in the heavy storm
You act as normal within the hardship
Now I understand, your heart kept us warm
Every battle that you fought, every lesson that you taught
Now I see, it wasn’t for naught, your love was the anchor I sought
I was watching, though I didn’t know, your silent strength helped me grow
In your footsteps, now I go, your legacy within me flows
You keep standing when the big waves hit you
You move forward in the heavy storm
You act as normal within the hardship
Now I understand, your heart kept us warm
Daddy, now I see your fight, how you kept us in your sight
Through the dark and through the light,
you were my guiding star so bright
In your love, I find my might,
proud to carry on your life
Author
Bio
naomi is a multilingual Lyricist who blends technology with creativity to craft music that resonates with listeners worldwide. Starting with poetry, Naomi’s journey evolved into songwriting, producing heartfelt and emotional lyrics in English, Japanese, and occasionally Spanish. Her music spans genres from pop to new age ballads and inspirational instrumental tracks. Currently, Naomi uses Suno pro to produce her music, always exploring new ways to bring her musical visions to life. Passionate about collaboration, Naomi shares her love for music with people around the world.
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Lyrics Competition Results
Emotional Impact:
20/ 20
Technical Skill:
20/ 20
Memorability:
15/ 20
Storytelling:
20/ 20
Imagery:
13/ 20
Total Score:
88/ 100
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Comments:
Such a deeply moving story of a father being there throughout your life, even if you didn’t always see what he did for you. I have a dad like that too so really connected to this song- in fact I cried in a coffee shop reading your lyric!
The only thing I could possibly suggest is to try using the show don’t tell method of writing lyrics as it will take your writing to the next level.
The only thing I could possibly suggest is to try using the show don’t tell method of writing lyrics as it will take your writing to the next level.
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