2025 Competition Lyrics Entry:
Ever loving kind by Jason Wiley
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THE EVER-LOVING KIND FINAL FINA L Copyright 2025 Daniel Dale Wiley and Jason Dean Wiley
FINAL FINAL FINAL
First Verse
My heart has a mind
Of the ever-loving kind.
Yes my heart has a mind of its own.
But my mind has no heart,
No heart to break apart
And my mind thinks I should leave you all alone
CHORUS MOSTLY NEW AND IMPROVED.
But (So) don’t you worry about it baby, (Use “but” after the first chorus only and “so” afterwards)
And don’t you let it make you blue.
No force on this earth could ever change me,
For my heart has a mind
Of the ever-loving kind
And my heart will always be with you.
Second verse
My heart is the type
That can see through all the hype,
And I know what it wants me to do.
My true heart loves you so
My mind can’t make me go,
For my heart thinks I should always be with you.
REPEAT CHORUS (Start with “so”)
BRIDGE
Mind over matter
Heart over mind.
My heart won’t let me leave you,
Not now or any time.
My mind no longer matters
Once my heart makes up it’s mind,
My heart will not deceive you
For your heart’s a heart like mine.
REPEAT CHORUS (Start with “so”)
ENDING ALTERNATE ENDING
SLOW DOWN GRADUALLY
Yes my heart has a mind
Yes my heart has a mind Of the ever-loving kind
Of the ever-loving kind, And my heart will a l ways be with you.
The ever-loving kind,
The ne-ver leav-ing kind. (I think I prefer this one)
THE EVER-LOVING KIND FINAL FINA L Copyright 2025 Daniel Dale Wiley and Jason Dean Wiley
FINAL FINAL FINAL
First Verse
My heart has a mind
Of the ever-loving kind.
Yes my heart has a mind of its own.
But my mind has no heart,
No heart to break apart
And my mind thinks I should leave you all alone
CHORUS MOSTLY NEW AND IMPROVED.
But (So) don’t you worry about it baby, (Use “but” after the first chorus only and “so” afterwards)
And don’t you let it make you blue.
No force on this earth could ever change me,
For my heart has a mind
Of the ever-loving kind
And my heart will always be with you.
Second verse
My heart is the type
That can see through all the hype,
And I know what it wants me to do.
My true heart loves you so
My mind can’t make me go,
For my heart thinks I should always be with you.
REPEAT CHORUS (Start with “so”)
BRIDGE
Mind over matter
Heart over mind.
My heart won’t let me leave you,
Not now or any time.
My mind no longer matters
Once my heart makes up it’s mind,
My heart will not deceive you
For your heart’s a heart like mine.
REPEAT CHORUS (Start with “so”)
ENDING ALTERNATE ENDING
SLOW DOWN GRADUALLY
Yes my heart has a mind
Yes my heart has a mind Of the ever-loving kind
Of the ever-loving kind, And my heart will a l ways be with you.
The ever-loving kind,
The ne-ver leav-ing kind. (I think I prefer this one)
Author
Bio
Dan Wiley age 74 Terrace B.C. Canada. Jason Wiley age 50 Sooke B.C. Canads
Co-author(s)
Jason Wiley
Lyrics Competition Results
Emotional Impact:
9/ 20
Technical Skill:
8/ 20
Memorability:
8/ 20
Storytelling:
11/ 20
Imagery:
9/ 20
Total Score:
45/ 100
Commended
Comments:
Some nice storytelling here.
Try using the show don’t tell method to make your lyrics paint a picture for the listener
Try using the show don’t tell method to make your lyrics paint a picture for the listener
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