2025 Competition Lyrics Entry:

The Poem (nursery rhyme) by Gregory Elivonchik

Lyrics

Verse

Close your eyes and dream away
to wake up in another day
where the land is so beautiful and unique
where we talk with our souls
no need to speak

Chorus
It’s as beautiful as a nursery rhyme
you will want to be there
all the time
so come with me so far away
to that beautiful land of another day.

Verse

Cast of your troubles
which confuse your mind
and come with me
to this land of time
where flowers grow oh so very tall
and the leaves on the trees
shall never fall

Chorus

It’s as beautiful
as a nursery rhyme
you will want to be there
all the time
so come with me so far away
to that beautiful land of another day
to that beautiful land of another day
to that beautiful land of another day.

Bio

Singer songwriter for over 50 years
You can find me as greggace on the Internet

Co-author(s)

Lyrics Competition Results

Emotional Impact:
10/ 20
Technical Skill:
10/ 20
Memorability:
8/ 20
Storytelling:
13/ 20
Imagery:
9/ 20
Total Score:
50/ 100
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