2025 Competition Lyrics Entry:
Ivi’s Song by Doug Shear
- Submitted:
- No Comments
Lyrics
I love you just a little bit
in case you haven’t looked
It’s just a little bit of love
don’t think you have me hooked
You would not want my whole, whole heart
Trust me, it’s quite a chore
You would not like my words of love
You’ve heard them all before
I’ll give you just a taste of me
A tiny little puff
A hit too big might scare you off
My finish is still rough
I’ll whisper a few feelings
As softly as I can
I’ll love you just a little bit
A sort of average fan
But take this teeny love I give,
And I will say for sure
That every night, long as I live
I’ll love you just a little bit … more
in case you haven’t looked
It’s just a little bit of love
don’t think you have me hooked
You would not want my whole, whole heart
Trust me, it’s quite a chore
You would not like my words of love
You’ve heard them all before
I’ll give you just a taste of me
A tiny little puff
A hit too big might scare you off
My finish is still rough
I’ll whisper a few feelings
As softly as I can
I’ll love you just a little bit
A sort of average fan
But take this teeny love I give,
And I will say for sure
That every night, long as I live
I’ll love you just a little bit … more
Author
Bio
I write books, films, stage plays and true story monologues. I have read them to audiences in Florida and North Carolina. They are on my YouTube channel.
Three of my books are published and available online everywhere and in the Wake County Public Library for free.
I also wrote and produced a documentary called NO PICTURES PLEASE that was shut down by the police in Wynwood, Florida. It’s on my YouTube.
Two of my short films won awards, including best screenplay, and my stage plays have been performed, one way or another, in South Florida, Toronto and Alaska.
My Parasite Paradise short on YouTube has gotten more than 9000 views.
Plus, on Vimeo, under my fake persona Bobbie Chuan – the Queen of Pubic Hair, my video 50 Styles of Intimate Hair has gotten more than 600,000 views!
But my greatest talent, thankfully, is my ability to remain a complete unknown.
I hope everyone gets or stays peaceful and happy.
Three of my books are published and available online everywhere and in the Wake County Public Library for free.
I also wrote and produced a documentary called NO PICTURES PLEASE that was shut down by the police in Wynwood, Florida. It’s on my YouTube.
Two of my short films won awards, including best screenplay, and my stage plays have been performed, one way or another, in South Florida, Toronto and Alaska.
My Parasite Paradise short on YouTube has gotten more than 9000 views.
Plus, on Vimeo, under my fake persona Bobbie Chuan – the Queen of Pubic Hair, my video 50 Styles of Intimate Hair has gotten more than 600,000 views!
But my greatest talent, thankfully, is my ability to remain a complete unknown.
I hope everyone gets or stays peaceful and happy.
Co-author(s)
Lyrics Competition Results
Emotional Impact:
10/ 20
Technical Skill:
9/ 20
Memorability:
7/ 20
Storytelling:
12/ 20
Imagery:
10/ 20
Total Score:
48/ 100
Comments:
Some nice storytelling moments. Try to use the show don’t tell method so your lyrics have more variety.
Leave a comment