I’m Insane About you. My love for you cannot be measured. It exceeds all limits. It transcends all time. It’s an inner glow that grows with your presence. It’s the uncontrollable flow of thoughts that fill my heart and mind. I desire the touch of your body, and the warmth of your lips. And, I cannot conceive of a life without you, or the thought of you loving someone else. Understand, I’m Insane About you.
I’m not an artist. I’m a retired Navy photojournalist and a retired medical social worker. I love music and enjoy writing poems. I have one married daughter and six grandchildren.
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Lyrics Competition Results
Emotional Impact:
8/ 20
Technical Skill:
8/ 20
Memorability:
6/ 20
Storytelling:
8/ 20
Imagery:
5/ 20
Total Score:
35/ 100
Comments:
I think we need more from the story to really understand it. Try to use the show don’t tell method so your lyrics have more variety.
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