2025 Competition Lyrics Entry:
Winter Within by Chris Page
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Lyrics
Intro
V1
I didn’t mean to scare you
There’s winter in my bones
When life becomes too heavy
You can hear my glacier groan
V2
Sometimes I don’t go out
Cos my heart has been snowed in
And it doesn’t take too much
To hide and just stay in
Chorus
It’s a cold, cold winter.
But when, I think of you
You light up my fire
Deep inside
And All of these moments
Are divided into two
I’m waiting out this heart ache
In this world of black and blue
V3
But don’t you get me wrong
There’s beauty in endless white
The ice along my lashes
Reflect back the light
V4
So do not waste your worry
On blizzards and my storms
I’ve got my own flame burning
Deep inside
V1
I didn’t mean to scare you
There’s winter in my bones
When life becomes too heavy
You can hear my glacier groan
V2
Sometimes I don’t go out
Cos my heart has been snowed in
And it doesn’t take too much
To hide and just stay in
Chorus
It’s a cold, cold winter.
But when, I think of you
You light up my fire
Deep inside
And All of these moments
Are divided into two
I’m waiting out this heart ache
In this world of black and blue
V3
But don’t you get me wrong
There’s beauty in endless white
The ice along my lashes
Reflect back the light
V4
So do not waste your worry
On blizzards and my storms
I’ve got my own flame burning
Deep inside
Author
Bio
Hi there.
I’m Chris. I’m 60, which is good that I’ve got this far, but not so good in that I’ve had all that time to achieve very little !! .I write songs and record them in my little home studio. Been doing it for years. I mostly use other local singers to sing my songs as I don’t sing really (replace don’t with can’t) !!. Hope you like my song X
I’m Chris. I’m 60, which is good that I’ve got this far, but not so good in that I’ve had all that time to achieve very little !! .I write songs and record them in my little home studio. Been doing it for years. I mostly use other local singers to sing my songs as I don’t sing really (replace don’t with can’t) !!. Hope you like my song X
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Lyrics Competition Results
Emotional Impact:
12/ 20
Technical Skill:
11/ 20
Memorability:
8/ 20
Storytelling:
15/ 20
Imagery:
10/ 20
Total Score:
56/ 100
Comments:
Some nice storytelling moments. Try to use the show don’t tell method so your lyrics have more variety.
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