Your Love

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1. Unknown Member 27 January, 2023

   Comments on Facebook. Good luck Geraldine 🤞

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   Suzanne Harper 28 January, 2023

   There are some interesting lyrics here, Geraldine. I liked particularly the references to moonlight, shimmering & shining. Imagery and metaphors can be over-stretched but I think there’s more to play with here. Your piano accompaniment is progressing and I think sustained chords would add an interesting effect.

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   Geraldine Swain 28 January, 2023

   Thanks Suzanne and Heather for your Comments. Good luck to you both too 🙂