The Essential Probability Of Winning In Life

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1. Unknown Member 5 April, 2022

   Yeah Bob that works mighty fine for me as an alternative funk groovy off centre blues and jazzy arrangement, lyrics and instrumentation. It’s perfectly weird in absolutely all the right ways. Bob, this is great! And, I love the lyrics which are almost 100% clear! Post them please for me and others to get the 100% experience Bob! If you fancy taking this into a ‘song hospital’ type forum I’d be the first to suggest some extra weird and wonderful inputs such as but certainly not limited to the following – Phased guitar, off beat percussion, secondary vocals echoed, distorted, screaming in the background sort of madness and finally, some maniacal laughter like on, ‘Dark Side of The Moon’ – or not as the case may be lol. Super work Bob! You’ve got my vote! Cheers, Terry.

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   Bob Carter 5 April, 2022

   Thanks Terry. Brilliant feedback. I’m working with a band and the guitarist loves David Gilmore, as do i

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   Bob Carter 5 April, 2022

   Lyrics are a bit scribbly at the moment so I’ll have to type them up and post

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   Kris King 6 April, 2022

   Great vibe. I look forward to reading and digesting the lyrics when you post them. I love the hooky refrain.

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   Rebecca Richards 7 April, 2022

   Smoky and slightly spacey – in a good way!

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   Bob Carter 7 April, 2022

   Thanks Rebecca

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   Andy Parsons 24 April, 2022

   Great vocabulary in the lyrics and the images hooked me in to the song. Good song.