That Ship Has Sailed

Responses

1. 

   Ian Ball 13 April, 2023

   Wow, I love that there are so many different interpretations for these challenges. Beautiful, concise lyrics, not a single word was wasted. Brilliant

2. 

   Paul Fincken 13 April, 2023

   You’ve done the impossible – succeeded in using all those nautical phrases without it sounding corny. I really like it – nice tune, chords and accompaniment – well done Dave!

3. 

   Ann Radcliffe 13 April, 2023

   Short and sweet, yes I’m finding it really interesting listening to the different outcomes of this challenge.
   Especially like this one. Well done.

4. 

   Huw James 14 April, 2023

   A lovely interpretation of the challenge. Nice one Dave

5. 

   Tom Hench 15 April, 2023

   Nice song and performance! I really like the hook “This ship has sailed”!

6. 

   Andy Cook 15 April, 2023

   Lovely song, enjoyed the performance too.

7. 

   Andy Smith 16 April, 2023

   Very pretty tune. Well done

8. 

   Rebecca Richards 23 April, 2023

   Oh I love this. You’ve made tender loss and resolute rejection out of entirely nautical references and it doesn’t sound out of place at all. Lovely tune too. Top job

9. 

   Ervin Munir 24 April, 2023

   Nice one Dave. A lovely nautical break up song.

10. 

    Suzanne Harper 26 April, 2023

    Very cleverly constructed lyrics, Dave, woven skilfully together by your melody. Lovely development of the theme throughout to the punchline.