Slip Away
After bout of writer’s block managed to produce a song! Here it is. “Slip Away”
After bout of writer’s block managed to produce a song! Here it is. “Slip Away”
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I really enjoyed this. I like the way it builds from the picking to the strumming. My only problem was that I found the song structure a bit difficult to follow and hook into. I don’t think it has the conventional verse chorus bridge structure so I found it less accessible than I might have. But it might just be me. It’s a really nice song and good performance.
Love this Alan, I like the build and the images and the energy.
Fantastic Alan. The build up of the repeated chorus section is magnificent and I can hear a whole orchestra behind you emphasising the emotion behind that statement. Glorious.
I like this. I can feel it build and I enjoyed the way it burst into the different structure. I can hear an orchestra production too.
Well done. ???
I also like the build up. And the tune works really well over an interesting chord sequence. Good lyrics too – well done Alan.
Thanks all for your comments – really appreciate you listening.
Like the chorus buildup…also that sweet change I think from the major to the minor in the verse…