Moons&Tides
Wee song about finding the courage to sail forth again.
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Wee song about finding the courage to sail forth again.
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Good one Clare. “ The tide of life will surely turn again” nice line that 👍
Just a little tip, it would have been better if your guitar had been in tune.
Some nice words in there
Good effort Clare 😊
Enjoyed the moon female energy and tide pulling in and out lyrics. Theres a good drive to this.
Hi Clare
I like this. Yes the guitar is a little out of tune but you r lyric is really good. I think you posted your video early. Might be better to hold on and get your performance a bit smoother. I found turning in a reasonable performance in 3 weeks a real challenge and finding the time to record around the rest of the household quite tricky. Can’t beat a lilting voice like yours though. Good luck. Malster
Nice lyrics.
I feel like this song has a lot of potential. It has a quirkiness about it that I really like. I really enjoy your voice, too.
I know you’re a poet & lyric writer primarily, Clare, and the guitar is a new challenge for you so well done for sharing. Having first heard your song in the online workshop, it was an extra pleasure to see it here as well. You know these words mean a lot to me. Xx
Loving your voice, and some very good lyrics. My guitar doesn’t stay in tune either, so I call it alternative tuning! Well done.
There are some lovely lyrics in there as well as a strong melody that fit the words. I enjoyed this.