July Melody Challenge
Here is my entry for the July Melody Challenge. I have a title idea in mind, but will keep to myself so as not to influence anyone’s idea of what it could be about. The layout I had in mind was: Verse 1 – Pre-Chorus – Chorus 1 – Bridge – Verse 2 – Pre-Chorus – Chorus 2. Thanks for listening.
That works Well Kevin .
I love the tone in the guitar track. Plenty for a lyricist to grab hold of there👍
Interesting melody, really well presented for a lyricist to pick up. Wishing you well with this
Enjoyable melody and the guitar sounds great 😃
Thanks Phil, Catherine & Anne, I appreciate your comments.
Love the bridge and an unusual ending. Plenty of scope to work with, hope this gets picked up.
Starts with the big guitar sound then sparse piano notes and I think about The Waterboys (“This Is the Sea” perhaps) then – somehow – I get a taste of Deacon Blue and I think “this guy must be Scottish” but you’re from Wiltshire so I’m way off mark but there’s a lot there (for me) to like.
That’s a good melody Kevin and nicely structured too
Good strong memorable melody, the repeated sections work a treat, and it’s well resolved, lots of scope! Hope to hear the finished song!
Nice one Kevin. Immediately strong melody that I just enjoyed listening to even without lyrics. I get the Waterboys reference mentioned above.
Thanks Rebecca, Phil, Glyn, Tracy and Alan for your kind feedback. I’m glad you noticed the Bridge Rebecca … and Phil, I had a listen and I agree with The Waterboys reference (… although no immediate Scottish heritage that I know of …).
You’ve woven a melody that echoes in the mind after a few listens. Definitely plenty of scope for development.