It Would Sure Be Cool
Co-incidentally, this month’s monthly TiST workshop challenge was to write a country song so, I thought I’d include it in the monthly challenge too. I’m not sure if it matches the country genre but it was my intention to do so! Lyrics below:-
It Would Sure Be Cool …..
Waking in the morning
Thinking of you
Reaching for my phone
To see what’s new
A text from your number
With the line from a song
“I Just Called to Say I Love You”
But I’m still here alone
It would sure be cool, cool, cool
If you broke the rules, rules, rules
And shouted from the roof, roof, roof tops
That our love was breaking news, news, news
It would sure be cool, cool, cool
If you crossed the line, line, line
And never looked back, back, back again
And put your hand in mine
Waking in the morning
I know the score
Stuck in this longing
Hoping for more
There’s something I’m missing
I don’t wanna see
So you can keep on
Sweet talking me
It would sure be cool, cool, cool
If you broke the rules, rules, rules
And shouted from the roof, roof, roof tops
That our love was breaking news, news, news
It would sure be cool, cool, cool
If you crossed the line, line, line
And never looked back, back, back again
And put your hand in mine
Wouldn’t it be cool, cool, cool
To not be a fool, fool, fool,
And break my own rules, rules, rules
And find somebody new, new, new
Wouldn’t it be cool, cool, cool,
If I crossed the line, line, line
And made a new start. start, start
Before I run out of time
Wow, I remember this song when it was just hatched. Good job Louise
As I mentioned on Facebook this is very “quirky cool.” Great hip movie soundtrack material. I’m a fan!
As I said on FB this is a fabulous song Louise
Great lyrics – ear-wormy
Very niice Louise. I really like the use of the repeated words in the chorus.
Ian, Steve, Catherine, Kris & Hew – that you for listing and for your encouraging feedback – so very much appreciated.
I was there when this was born! You know I love your energy, Louise. You’re not afraid to try something new. I love the echos. It would be fun to hear this fully produced. I’m glad you kept the last verse in!
That was fun, really enjoyed it.
Thanks Suzanne & Andy. I really appreciate your feedback – spurs me on to write more!
Great!