I Can Write A Song
About that moment when you find love in a coffee shop.
About that moment when you find love in a coffee shop.
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Cool song, nice job!
I like rhythm of the lyric lines….
A lovely little song – great melody and bounce. I’m sure most of us have been there too!
Great song. Winsome little number and I do like the harmonies.
Ervin!!! What a joy to discover you. I love, love, LOVE the rhythmic changes, how your words crowd together and then slow to a more intelligible pace. Evocative, uplifting, and so very sweet. I can’t stop smiling.
Thank you Helene. That’s lovely feedback. Glad it made you smile.
A nice swinging song. Brings a smile to my face.
Well done Ervin!
That’s 2 people smiling. Lovely. Thank you.
Cool catchy tune…. Best of luck…
Thanks Dennis. It’s a bit more poppy than most, so it’ll be interesting to see how it fares.
Great cheerful rhythm – fun song!
Thank you
Lovely uplifting song!
Thanks Andy. I took a risk as often these competitions are won by less upbeat songs.
Very ear-wormy! And I love the rhymes and rhythms in the lyrics
Great fun – witty words and lovely harmonies.
Thanks very much Carol. I was aiming for something more contemporary Tay my usual songs.
Fun dancy escapism.
Thank you. That was what I was aiming for to.
A nice and simple song. Beautiful!??
Nice Job, your a groovy dude in a groovy mood, I liked it
Thank you Steven and Chris. I’m glad you like the song. It’s good to be groovy at my age! ?