I Built A Wall
I’ve recently joined Talent Is Timeless and this is my first submission to one of the monthly competitions..I hope you like it.
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I’ve recently joined Talent Is Timeless and this is my first submission to one of the monthly competitions..I hope you like it.
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Good song, catchy chorus, found myself singing a harmony! Nice performance too, liked your voice, great control. Really enjoyed it!
Welcome aboard, Ian. If this is your first submission, then I look forward to more. I like your voice, and this song is very catchy indeed. Cheers.
Hi Tracy Thanks for those kind words, really glad you enjoyed the song…(and performance) I’m not a great musician so trying to half remember the words half read the words and trying to play and sing is a all bit of a challenge…but I do really enjoy the creative aspect of song writing…which I guess is why we are all on here. Thanks again.
Hi Phil Yes my first song on here…it would have been posted a day or two earlier but didn’t realise you needed to upload it from specified platform rather than direct from your own device. Hence the hastily created YouTube channel…I guess I can now call my self a ‘Content Creator’! Hopefully I will be able to get my head round the technical stuff and create a decent site. (Fingers crossed). Glad you liked the song.
Nice bouncy rhythm, good tune, and I now have my ear-worm for the day! Well done in entering the worlds of both YouTube and Talent is Timeless.
Hi Paul. Thanks for taking the time to listen…glad you enjoyed it. Yep, the YouTube bit is a little daunting…hopefully I’ll get there!
A strong entry! I think you will do very well with it.
Welcome to the best songwriting community in the world!!!!
Hi Simon Very nice of you to say so….but from what I’ve seen and heard there are some very talented people out there so I have no great expectations. I’m back to song writing after a 40 year hiatus… so still a bit rusty, but it does seem like a nice place to be…and I’m very much looking forward to playing an active part in the ‘community’.
Well constructed and engaging – and toe-tappy. Nice one!
Kris King…”Well constructed and engaging – and toe-tappy.”….More than happy with that – Thank you for those kind words.
I really enjoyed this. It has a “Sting” quality about it. Great job.
Welcome to this eclectic band of fellow creative souls, Ian. It took me ages to work up the courage to post to YouTube & contribute to the monthly challenges. I still waver every month about entering but it gets my grey cells working.
This is a really strong, foot-tapping song & very catchy. Like Tracy, I found myself harmonising. It sounds good with just your vocals & guitar, but it would certainly lend itself to a fuller arrangement too.
Welcome Ian! I think you’ll find many of us are on huge learning curves and it’s been a fantastic community to join for helpful encouragement for people like me who are relatively new to songwriting. I really enjoyed your song, very catchy and I’m still humming it after playing which is always a good sign.
Welcome Ian, if this is you being “a bit rusty” then I can’t wait for when you are rust free!!!
Nice one Ian. Really like the change up between verse and chorus. Welcome to the world of TisT. Looking forward to hearing more from you