How Could I Know
Working with Kris was great fun and discovering our common interest in missing fingers. After the workshop I realised that part of the lyric was in first person and part in third so needless to say a little confusing. I felt that "some else's song" should be in third person, however at rewrite I l[ked the feel and rhyme of the first person section, so I hope you don't mind the rewrite Kris all in first.
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