First Lady
This month I challenged myself to not write another piano ballad. This was harder than I thought! I tried playing the guitar but my playing was horrible, so it’s piano again with a bit of mandolin on top of drum & bass. Very much welcome opinions, & feedback, I’m not sure about this one.
Hiya, I’m not sure why you aren’t sure about this song, it is very catchy. I think you were right not to ditch the piano completely as it certainly adds to the piece and (you’ll think I’m mad here!!!) it gives things a Hall & Oates soulful kind of feel – at least to my ears aging ears!. Nice one. Cheers, Phil
Great song again Bec. I like the piano. I can also hear the possibility of a guitar part in there
I think you should do more in this style. A great feel. Very engaging.
Great song Bec, got a nice driving bass and a feel of the time of Tapau, China Crisis, but with a bit more soul, just fab.
Superb, Bec. I can really hear a guitar part on this. Very good lyrics, as well.
Love the voice, great song!
Really like this Bec, as I said on Facebook. You could really develop it because it’s a very strong song. Excellent vocals too.
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How wonderful, Bec! Loved this – really good. The lyrics, melody and structure are really interesting… “Refractions of my life”…
I really enjoyed this Bec. Very catchy refrain draws you into the song – good lyric too.
Thank you everyone for your very kind comments. I almost didn’t post this I just didn’t think it was any good. Really appreciate you taking the time to listen & comment & giving me your words of encouragement x
Love the conversational, percussive style of the lyrics…some great lines.