BE LUCKY
Life has been a bit hectic so I haven't entered the monthly competition for a while, but the "chances" theme inspired me and this is the result.
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Really really nice Tom.
Very lovely. You’ve got a great sound going on there and a nice song.
I love the sound and the balance between your guitar and vocals. Perfect.
It’s a lovely song and very well performed. A good hook ‘There’s always one more chance to be lucky’ is still resonating in my head.
Your backdrop was set really well too. I love your room and decor.
I did find the camera moving round all the time rather distracting though. I was waiting for the camera person to trip over (which I’d definitely have done!). So I listened with my eyes shut the second time. Just a thought.
Hi Heather. Thanks for your kind comments. I know what you mean about the camera moving. I’ll have a word with the cameraman next time…
Beautiful Tom. Really enjoyed that. Your Taylor has a lovely warm tone and you have a very smooth, easy to listen to voice. Compliments the song entirely. Well done. Look forward to hearing some more of your songs.
I really enjoyed listening to your song and loved the way you ended it!
Ooooh your guitar is lush! Beautiful performance.
Thanks for all the kind comments, about the song and my guitar. With me not being a terribly accomplished guitar player I felt slightly guilty about spending the money, but the positive comments about how it sounds have reassured me it was the right thing to do. And thanks, Tracy, for your comments about the ending. Returning to the opening lyric is a ploy I sometimes employ in my songwriting, but I think it works particularly well in the context of this song.
Nicw one Tom
Nice even.
Beautifully played and recorded Tom!
There’s a lovely warm feel to the whole thing.
Thanks Huw.
Thanks David. Your song got my vote by the way. Loved it.
You can vote as many times as you want…but not for your own I think???