All Falls Down
This is song on response to Tracy’s challenge.
This is song on response to Tracy’s challenge.
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Great hook line Alan. chord progressions on the guitar worked perfectly. just a really good song.
Really like the mood and feel of this. Lovely guitar and great lyrics.
Well crafted. One or two unexpected chords in there too. I like the change of texture in the middle section.
I really enjoyed this, Alan. I particularly like the mid-line rhymes, which flow so nicely. You’ve obviously worked hard on the lyric, but it doesn’t sound at all forced. Nice chord pattern and performance too.
Good Song- Congrats.
Very nice Alan, like Paul I enjoyed the mid-liners and the guitar work/chord pattern.
Brilliant!
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Love it! Some great unexpected chord progressions there. Tidy job once again
This has a gripping narrative, it could be turned into a play – a gritty drama, maybe. The melody fits it perfectly too. Great stuff.
Class as always. Liked the chord structure and “all falls down” is a great hook.
As Rebecca said… class as always. There are some great chord shifts in there. Fab performance as well.
Big fan of this one
I really like this, Alan. I love the chord progressions & the conversational & yet poetic use of your lyrics. It all has a natural, unforced feel to it and now the “All falls down” refrain has glued itself into my ear. Lovely stuff, once again.