A tenuous link as it's about home and what exactly that home is, is uncertain. Ignore the performance, the picking pattern still ties my fingers up in knots, the bridge isn't great and I cock up the last chorus!
I'll appreciate any criticisms on the song.
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I find this a very moving song, Ian. The ending of the chorus on a minor chord is very effective & the way you build to it tugs at my heart strings . Lovely, flowing finger picking.
Lovely song with some great lyrics. The picking pattern is great. And I like the variation between verse and chorus
A real yearning and rumination of the past coming over clearly here Ian. Lovely.
Enjoyed that Ian. Nice variation between verse and chorus. Tidy
The ambience of the guitar fingerpicking in the verse lends just the right ambience to your reflective lyrics. I particularly liked the melody in the verses. Lovely song.
Thank you all for your complements.