2025 Competition Entry:
You Couldn’t See Me by Ricktime Music
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Suno AI
Description
The song is about reflecting on how my stepson was affected by his upbringing and that it is never too late to accept some responsibility for the pain caused.
Bio
I began my lyricist journey in Oct 2024.
AI has granted me the chance to express so many thoughts, that I feel a new purpose in life.
There is a lot to say and the 70 songs penned to date is just the start.
AI has granted me the chance to express so many thoughts, that I feel a new purpose in life.
There is a lot to say and the 70 songs penned to date is just the start.
Lyrics
Sometimes your smile
Just won’t get you through
The day can be long
Alone and so blue
Surrounded by friends
Who don’t understand
You just need somebody
To walk hand in hand
Inside where your’e all alone
The days you won’t pick up the phone
Dark thoughts showing in your head
Closing your door
And hiding in bed
A Mum and dad who never knew
All the harm they put you through
Too busy with their own time
Not seeing
You were not fine
No loving home to live in
Your head
Always in a spin
How could you make them see
Please
Just look at me
That time you tore it all down
Thought you’d be seen
But ran away from town
Left that note
You were gone for good
Tried to die
Nobody understood
Inside where your’e all alone
The days you won’t pick up the phone
Dark thoughts showing in your head
Closing your door
And hiding in bed
They found you at the station
As the trains were speeding by
You must have been so lonely
Angry thoughts that made you cry
Your mother couldn’t take it
Didn’t want to understand
That she came so close
To losing you
And that she gave a helping hand
School days were lost forever
You couldn’t sit among the crowd
But drama helped you act and sing
You made your parents proud
Did they see you on that night
Or, were they selfish still
You knew that it was too late then
As you took another pill
Inside where your’e all alone
The days you won’t pick up the phone
Dark thoughts showing in your head
Closing your door
And hiding in bed
Always hiding in bed….
As you grew you found some good friends
But then girls played with you too
Soon your mind was back in that dark place
Doctor’s couldn’t help you through
Then your mother threw you out one night
Thought tough love was being kind
But dad would not forgive her
Tough love to him was blind
Now while youv’e moved on
And grown into a man
And your parents are just a memory
You still can’t understand
Why they still can’t see you
What your’e making of your life
And how you still feel lonely
It still cuts you like a knife
Inside where your’e all alone
The days you won’t pick up the phone
Dark thoughts showing in your head
Closing your door
And hiding in bed
Dark thoughts still showing in your head
Always hiding in bed…..
Just won’t get you through
The day can be long
Alone and so blue
Surrounded by friends
Who don’t understand
You just need somebody
To walk hand in hand
Inside where your’e all alone
The days you won’t pick up the phone
Dark thoughts showing in your head
Closing your door
And hiding in bed
A Mum and dad who never knew
All the harm they put you through
Too busy with their own time
Not seeing
You were not fine
No loving home to live in
Your head
Always in a spin
How could you make them see
Please
Just look at me
That time you tore it all down
Thought you’d be seen
But ran away from town
Left that note
You were gone for good
Tried to die
Nobody understood
Inside where your’e all alone
The days you won’t pick up the phone
Dark thoughts showing in your head
Closing your door
And hiding in bed
They found you at the station
As the trains were speeding by
You must have been so lonely
Angry thoughts that made you cry
Your mother couldn’t take it
Didn’t want to understand
That she came so close
To losing you
And that she gave a helping hand
School days were lost forever
You couldn’t sit among the crowd
But drama helped you act and sing
You made your parents proud
Did they see you on that night
Or, were they selfish still
You knew that it was too late then
As you took another pill
Inside where your’e all alone
The days you won’t pick up the phone
Dark thoughts showing in your head
Closing your door
And hiding in bed
Always hiding in bed….
As you grew you found some good friends
But then girls played with you too
Soon your mind was back in that dark place
Doctor’s couldn’t help you through
Then your mother threw you out one night
Thought tough love was being kind
But dad would not forgive her
Tough love to him was blind
Now while youv’e moved on
And grown into a man
And your parents are just a memory
You still can’t understand
Why they still can’t see you
What your’e making of your life
And how you still feel lonely
It still cuts you like a knife
Inside where your’e all alone
The days you won’t pick up the phone
Dark thoughts showing in your head
Closing your door
And hiding in bed
Dark thoughts still showing in your head
Always hiding in bed…..
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